final cut feedback

1. Genre and use of conventions
alternative and individual - gooooooood
circusy

2. target audience
stoners
strange people
not kids, it would scare them

3. Camera shots
really good shots such as the broken mirror
camera angles really worked, there was a good variety
sun rays excelent

4. editing
sometimes to fast
back and white really worked - abstract otherwise could look tacky
fantastic

5. mise en scene
masks worked really well, as did forest
Mc Donalds = bad
the scene of the mask being pulled over another mask was effective.

6. lip sinking
was not enuf .