other ideas

A new idea we have had after watching Suede staring John Hurt was to add an actual story to the video.
To do this we decided that what we had so far was good, and should be kept, but that we needed to introduce a re occurring character who adopted the clown make up, but wore a suite, as he continued to live his life. This would allow us to film scenes such as him in class, or trying to do something with his life but each time gets distracted by the simple joy of clowing around, rather than the respected activities that in some ways are even more of a joke than just having fun.

This will mean we can get some kind of relationship between the audience and the events going on in the video, which ultimately should mean any message we are trying to bring across will grab the viewers attention.